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I used to think that maybe if the sun would set in the east it would make my father mad and I would feel okay My father is one of those people who think that everything will be perfect just as long as everything is on the right schedule I have never believed in schedules or perfection because Im not perfect and the only I schedule use is the one at school Im just an average teenage girl whos trying to find her place in the world I just started my senior year and its not all what I thought it would be Not only is it my first year with my dad but its my first year in a totally new school an American one at that A year before I lived with my mother in England I had lived in England as long as I can remember We didnt always live there but after a nasty divorce my mom thought that it would be good to make a new start in another country So we moved to a small city in England but close to France as well I was very little when we moved there so I didnt have to worry about leaving friends behind I started school when I was about six and learned the language very well and very quickly Although England speaks English like Americans there are more accents and pronunciation when spoken I made a lot of friends and all of my teachers liked me I was a very happy child until the day my mother died At the age of 35 my mother was a professional artist and a very beautiful woman She owned her own art shop teaching others the beauty of art but also selling her personal artwork Many of her paintings hang in the walls of rich men and women of England She was once hired to paint a portrait of the Royal Familys
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