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Immorality in Society and the Creation of Laws to Reduce It

This paper discusses a variety of moral dilemmas that are prevalent in society today. The author mentions homosexuality, domestic violence, terrorism, and dominance.
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"Upon first glance, your paper is very neatly formatted, making it easier to read. The only issue I ran across was the inconsistent indentation of your paragraphs. You also have included a lot of factual content to support the topics you are writing about, making your paper appear scholarly. However, because of some writing choices made, the overall goal of your essay is not clear. I encourage you to include an introduction with some background information and a thesis statement to remedy this. I also encourage you to add a conclusion that summarizes the main points you made in the essay's body and relates them to the thesis statement. This will communicate the purpose of your paper and show readers that you are focused on that purpose. Last, a significant amount of work needs to be done in terms of the writing conventions in the paper. There are many sentence structure and grammar errors to be found. If this is an error of writing that is challenging for you, consider having someone proofread your paper to provide specific feedback."

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