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Importance of Computers for the Youth of Tomorrow

This informative essay gives an understanding about the importance of computers to today’s youth.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Christina's feedback:

"Well done ensuring you shared the purpose of your paper in the beginning paragraph, letting the reader know what you will be discussing in the following body paragraphs. Your content contained good reasoning and answered each of the criteria you set in the first paragraph. Good work ensuring your transitions were smooth and allowed the reader to easily flow from one paragraph/subject to the next. One thing to review again is your conclusion. Let’s ensure you are writing a more developed conclusion that gives an overview of what you spoke about in your body paragraphs, as it will also ensure you have expressed what you would like the reader to take away from your paper. When it comes to conventions, you would benefit from a minor round of proofreading to ensure your paper is clean and ready for submission."

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