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Do not forget to take your jacket or else you will catch a cold were my mothers famous last words as I left the house on a cool spring evening Of course being the typical teenager that I am I responded Its not cold outside I wont need it Boy was I wrong My nave actions eventually lead me to contracting a cold Looking back I now realize that not properly dressing for the weather and lacking adequate sleep caused the onset of the dreaded cold As soon as the first signs of spring were present I immediately ran to my closet and searched for my summer attire I shed my bulky sweater and exchanged it for a light T-shirt However spring weather is extremely unpredictable and I discovered I was a bit too soon in exchanging my wardrobe After the sun set the temperature dropped and wearing only my light clothing made me long for the jacket my mother was holding in her hands Eventually as the evening continued I began to shiver as I stood outside next to my friends and hoped we would go inside soon I realized that I was inadequately dressed I was not only standing outside in summer clothing on a cold evening but I was also out until the early predawn hours When I finally arrived home I was only able to get four hours of sleep because I had to wake up early and go help out at our store I was extremely tired and still had to run around and be on my feet in order to help my dad with the smokehouse Afterwards I only had enough time to take a shower and grab some dinner because it was Saturday night and my best friend was having a huge birthday party Once again I had a late night By the time Sunday came around I felt so drained that I knew my unhealthy lifestyle was
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