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Dont you have a father a question that I had to oppose everyday Ever since I had developed a longing for a father I had realized that one could not function without the presence of his father Everyday I had to defy all the criticisms that my own friends bestowed upon me However I knew that I would meet my father some day the father that I had so longed for On January 19 1994 my flight to America took off at approximately three in the morning Outside the sky was still dark Stars were still shining as bright as ever I sat in my seat patiently until the plane had landed Suddenly I heard a loud noise coming from the speaker saying We have arrived to Sandiego Quickly I took all of my belongings and headed for the entrance As I walked towards the entrance my heart began to pound My heart beat faster every second My mom my sister and I began to look for my father To get more familiar with his appearance I took out his picture held it tightly to my hand and looked at it every minute and then Suddenly a man dressed in black suit and pants walked towards us He looked so strange but yet somewhat familiar I looked at my picture one more time and there he was my father Strangely I did not feel a bond between us It seemed as if we were two different people I was hoping to get a hug from him but he didnt come The father that I was longing for was somehow destroyed from my memory at that moment He did not smile when he saw us not even said hello When we got home he did not say a word nor tried to develop a relationship with me It seemed so strange how he kept on leaving every two weeks While he was
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