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India Is to Blame for the Conflict with Pakistan over Kashmir

In this argumentative essay, a student discusses the conflict between India and Pakistan over Kashmir. The student provides background information on how the conflict began and asserts that India is the guilty party in the matter.
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Angela's feedback:

"You have a solid understanding of the conflict in Kashmir between India and Pakistan and its history. You also make your stance on the issue clear, and it is good that you offer a solution to the problem. A thorough edit is recommended to address writing convention errors. The beginning of every sentence should be capitalized, and review is needed to ensure exactly one space appears between words and between sentences. Terms such as “bilateral” and “plebiscite” should not be capitalized when they appear in the middle of a sentence. Even though dates such as “15 December” are read as ordinal numbers (e.g., the fifteenth of December), standard practice is to write them in cardinal form. As a matter of consistency, months such as October should not be abbreviated."

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