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Kibin. (2024). The individual's struggle against community in brave new world. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/individuality-a-threat-or-a-gift-to-society-Wrdr304C
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"This essay shows purpose and focus within a structure that moves the discussion along. You've incorporated the quotations smoothly and well, asserting your control of the source text. I see a number of opportunities to continue refining syntax and style to shape each body paragraph into a more efficient discussion; some tasks could include trimming redundancies by fusing sentences together and revising toward more purposeful and active language. For example, rather than phrases like "This shows that..." or "X is seen in...", consider reframing these claims by making the author or the text the subject of the sentence. This will also help clarify a bit further the line between textual analysis and references to real-world situations; this is a little muddled in the conclusion (does the sentence "But with an influx of..." refer to the novel or current events?), something that makes the reader question if they missed other moments where fiction and fact were brought together to express your position and ethos. Proofread, too, to catch errors as part of this project of improving clarity and presentation."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). The individual's struggle against community in brave new world. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/individuality-a-threat-or-a-gift-to-society-Wrdr304C
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("The Individual's Struggle against Community in Brave New World.")
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"The Individual's Struggle against Community in Brave New World." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/individuality-a-threat-or-a-gift-to-society-Wrdr304C
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1. "The Individual's Struggle against Community in Brave New World." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/individuality-a-threat-or-a-gift-to-society-Wrdr304C.
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"The Individual's Struggle against Community in Brave New World." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/individuality-a-threat-or-a-gift-to-society-Wrdr304C.
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