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Interior Monologue This is really scary I dont even really understand how we got here I dont even know why we are here It seems like were on an island but I dont think Im going to have fun I want to leave and go home because Im scared Im with other boys my age but were all so small I dont think we can do much There must be older boys here too but they probably wont even care about us Were too young for them to care Theyll probably let us get lost Im scared All of a sudden a really loud noise came It sounded like a whistle my Daddy used to have I hoped it was my Daddy or a grown up so then wed be safe We all went after it I was eager to figure something out Im so confused and I am not having fun The other boys and I finally found where the whistle was coming from It wasnt my dad or anyones dad It was an older boy blowing in a shell I wonder why he was doing it There was another older boy with glasses beside him I guess that they are in charge Maybe they know more than us Okay everything is clearer now There is a bunch of us kids stuck on an island without any parents It seems like it will be fun Im a little scared but I think itll be fine The leader is the older boy with the shell his name is Ralph The other boys name is Piggy Everyone laughed when we heard that It was very funny There was also a boys choir Their leader is an older boy named Jack Hes a funny boy he is very serious about his hunting and what not I think he wanted to be leader but we all liked the shell boy more I am more relaxed now not too
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