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"This essay has a good structure overall and follows a logical progression through the play, which works with your assertion that Macbeth's mental state declines as the play goes on. Please be sure you are fully developing each paragraph and fleshing out any main points you are setting out to prove within the introduction. You also want to be sure your conclusion consists of a summary of your body paragraphs and a takeaway for the reader. Right now, I don't see an actual conclusion paragraph, and the essay ends with a brief synopsis of a small part of Act 5. Your paper would also benefit from a solid round of editing to ensure any issues of punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure are resolved before submission. Take care to fix up incomplete sentences and messy or missing punctuation."
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Kibin. (2023). Is macbeth a strong or weak character?. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/is-macbeth-a-strong-or-weak-character-lLS2vqPe
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