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Jeffrey Dahmer and the Question of Nature Versus Nurture

In this essay, the student details the crimes of serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer. The student also explores the nature versus nurture argument by examining the circumstances of his upbringing.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Natalie's feedback:

"The crimes of Jeffrey Dahmer remain some of the most disturbing in history. As far as content goes, you did a great job of providing a lot of details in an informative and succinct manner. There was some awkward phrasing, but this can be easily fixed by proofreading aloud to catch any problematic sections. You integrated your quotes pretty well, but watch out for longer quotes like the one in the last paragraph on page two, which should be formatted as a block quote. There were several other minor formatting errors throughout your paper (particularly in regard to the in-text citations), so be sure to reference an MLA style guide. In terms of organization, your content flowed fairly well but could use more transitional words and phrases. I also felt that your focus was a bit unclear until the very end of the paper when you addressed the nature versus nurture argument, so you may want to allude to this in your introductory paragraph to give the reader a better sense of your purpose. Overall, you have a good draft. With some edits, you will have a great paper!"

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