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Suffocation can result to light headedness emotional discomfort and in extreme cases brain damage None of which I would relate to a passionate kiss The air was hot with static on a life changing night With every step I took currents ran through my body My elated best friend Marissa shook the night with her exuberant smile almost calming my senses You know its not every night a girl gets her first kiss she said with a now becoming annoying sparkle in her eye I begrudgingly turned to her and replied I dont know if this is even the night I dont know if this is even the guy What if Im not good What if all the kissing scenes Ive studied wont even help Hes going to think Im terrible She just laughed and said Its not a game of skill Just follow his lead and dont worry so much We quickly hugged and pulled our bathing suits on over our athieticly young fourteen-year-old bodies and joined the party awaiting us upstairs We reached the top of the stairs and I looked out to see mounds of bodies lounging all over the front yard Two large hot tubs engulfed the scruff of lawn and the one car drive Through the mesh of people I finally spotted Chris His lean tan body stretched over his 62 frame He spotted me and made this way through the crowd He finally made it pushing his way through and there we stood breast-to-breast Saying our hellos he drew me up into his arms and embraced me like we had not seen each other just yesterday We settled into our usual sarcastic conversation but with a sweep of my hair the conversation changed You look amazing He said not quite able to remove his eyes from my half naked body As do you I replied turning his attention back to my face We both smiled and joined the roar
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