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The winter cold pierced through my icy heart No matter how much I try the summers strong streak of light seemed like the winters frigid icicles As I shrieked away from the strong gaze of the suns rays I am no longer able to cast a shadow The Earth below me refused to carry my burdens My name seldom uttered filled with anger and pain I am nothing now just like before Every step I take onto this grotesque land pierces another hollow into my heart The ice dancing on my skin consumed my spirit No one peaked through the window to my icy heart No one cared for my thoughts all they wanted to do was throw me deeper into the grave they dug with ruthless words Darkness surrounds me People are turning against me and no one cares how it affects me My world is an abyss where I cannot get out As their daunting words haunt me and their appalling actions crush me they do not realize it hurts Are my tears not real Do they not have any meaning The salty colorless water drops mean that I am hurt It is not easy going through this alone I am a person There is group of them Their hair shines bright like a diamond under the light Their broad shoulders looked like they were ready to pounce like a Bengal Tiger Their tree like hands danced around effortlessly as they waved to their friends As they strutted down the stairs like Rihanna all I could see was Satan coming towards me They are the ones who bring me down day by day They use hurtful words whether aware or completely ignorant they do not realize it hurtsI have a heart that cries every day There isnt one day where I can look back and cherish the day I
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