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Kibin. (2023). Keep it simple: zissner's guide to writing. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/keep-it-simple-zissners-guide-to-writing-Qv6bWRYk
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Keep It Simple: Zissner's Guide to Writing
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"I think that you are definitely off to a great start with your journal entry, and you seem to have a good grasp on the material from the text. However, some of the response is a bit choppy, and I think it could be improved by making use of more compound and complex sentence structures. You give a nice overview of the topic, but your explanations are a bit broad and could be improved by providing more quotes from the text to help explain how simplicity helps readers understand a piece of writing more easily. Although no style guide was specified, it appears that the journal was written to adhere to MLA, but there are a number of formatting issues in the reference, citation, and quotation that should be resolved before submitting the journal."
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