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Kitchen Tools and the Impact Quadrilaterals Have on the World

This is an assignment where a student had to name kitchen tools and equipment, describe them and their function, and write an essay on what the world would be like without quadrilaterals. The kitchen tools that the author chose to represent are a serving tray, cleaning sponge, cleaver knife, and a potholder. Regarding a world without quadrilaterals, the author focused on how quadrilaterals are critical in architecture, media, art and design, and technology. The author explicitly mentions graphic design as a field that would become unnecessarily complicated.
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"This assignment is off to an excellent start. I do not have much to say about formatting since you wrote in a template. Your writing is very neat, which does help with reading comprehension and text cohesion. Also, since you are responding to prompts, the purpose of your essay is clear, and it is apparent that you stayed focused on it. While the content of your writing does not have a lot of grammar, punctuation, or sentence structure errors, there are some, so please make sure to read through the text and make sure these are taken care of. Also, the text feels as if it is missing details that are necessary to understand what you are trying to communicate. You can start improving this by adding more detail to your thesis statement and using the new thesis statement to guide the body of your work."

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