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Knife Violence Is On The Rise Among Youth: How We Can Stop It

This is an essay about knife violence among youth. The author notes the troubling instances of racism in addressing this type of crime and laments the cuts to the youth services budget.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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"This essay is off to a great start. You have clearly defined the challenge of knife violence among youth. You have also included some interesting ideas about the problem. To further improve this essay, you should include some statistics or outside research to buttress your points. Please also provide some possible solutions to the problem. For example, you touch on money that was cut from the youth services budget. Is it the government's responsibility to address youth problems? Does family life impact crime? How does modern employment affect youth and families? What are some possible ways that people can actually solve knife violence? This paper would benefit from a round of editing to address the minor grammar issues and typos."

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