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The Similarities in the Reactions and Behaviors of Laertes and Hamlet

In this analytical essay, a student compares the characters Laertes and Hamlet from the play Hamlet by William Shakespeare. The student notes how they are similar in their treatment of loved ones such as their fathers and Ophelia.
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Angela's feedback:

"You do a good job of describing in broad strokes how Hamlet and Laertes are alike and different in their treatment of various characters from the play. However, it’s often difficult to follow your argument because of your essay’s structure. It would be helpful if your introduction shared an overview of all the supporting points you intend to cover in your body paragraphs. Then your body paragraphs could be arranged so that they each focus on one supporting point. Furthermore, your analysis would be stronger if you integrated direct quotes into your own statements instead of sharing such quotes in parenthesis. While there aren’t many writing convention errors, an edit is recommended to fix typos and add commas where appropriate."

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