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Language and its Impact on Culture and Society

This analytical essay discusses language and its effect on cultures and society.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Christina's feedback:

"You did very well ensuring your content contained good information for the reader. You had well-developed ideas and reasoning as well. The following are things you can remember in order to ensure your paper is ready for submission. First, you want to be sure you have a clear purpose for your paper, as this lets the reader know what you will be focusing on. Next, you want to be sure your transitions offer a smooth bridge in order to flow easily from one subject to the next. For instance, from paragraph two to three, where you go from talking about parallelism to metaphor, you could offer a smooth transition by writing the following at the beginning of the third paragraph: "While parallelism is used, metaphor is the author's way of indicating that society, including one's loved ones, tends to control what language..." As stated before, this is a way to give that smooth flow from one paragraph to the next. Regarding formatting, you would benefit greatly from reviewing your style guide for MLA format to assist with spacing, the title page, the works cited page, and a title. When it comes to conventions, you might want to ensure a strong round of proofreading is done to take care of things like capitalization, punctuation, and grammar. This ensures your work is cleared of all and any errors and ready for submission."

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