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Large Multinational Corporations Have Too Much Power over Society

In this analytical essay, a student considers the argument put forth by the author of an article on large multinational corporations. The student agrees with the author of the article that there should be more government oversight of such corporations since unrestricted capitalism has led to them doing permanent damage to the environment and normalizing the mistreatment of low-wage workers.
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Angela's feedback:

"You provide a solid summary of the source and do a good job of explaining why you agree with the author's stance. It would be helpful to the reader if you provided the title of the source and the name of its author in your essay and then referred to the author by name instead of saying "the author" throughout the rest of your work. While you don't have many writing convention errors, fixing the few issues that are present would noticeably strengthen your work. For example, the word "international" should not be capitalized, and a check should be done to ensure you maintain consistent spacing between all your sentences. Recasting run-on sentences would improve the flow of your writing as would doing a final review to ensure articles (especially the word "the") have been inserted where appropriate. Inserting the word "the" in the phrase "represent [the] results of capitalism" helps to naturalize your language use. Remember that a citation should be included for direct quotes."

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