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What are we doing today I asked wondering when I got picked up from my pre-school My mom replied Were going to Kohls to get some stuff before we pick up your brother and sister I agreed thinking it would beat sitting at home watching Sponge Bob Square Pants and I was right by a long shot We arrived at Kohls and I was excited I thought I could get some toys or something We went to the toys aisle first to get me my toy my mom also picked up some outfits for me but I was way too busy with my toy to care I had picked up a new My mom kept walking but I didnt realize we were walking to the fitting room I was surprised when we got there Why are we over here I asked wanting to go home and open my toy already We are trying on some clothes My mom said confused by the frantic concern in my voice I didnt want to try on any clothes I started to do two of strongest talents whining and complaining Mom please dont make me Im not feeling good I dont like any of them they are all ugly no need to try them on If I try them on I get another toy I started to say My mom seemed confused Youre just going to try on a few outfits More than one I thought to myself I complained Mom I really dont want to the clothes look fine to me on the hanger to me My mom then said the worst thing she couldve said If you dont try them on you wont be able to get the toy Fear struck my face I reluctantly handed over my toy and went to try on the clothes as fast I possibly could
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