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Leaving the Past in the Past: Moving From My Childhood Home

This is a reflective essay about the experience of moving out of a childhood home. The author talks about growing up, along with a specific memory with her father and how her father would feel about the move.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You did a very nice job conveying emotion throughout this essay by describing your childhood experience and your father in detail. While some transitions between thoughts may seem abrupt, it is clear that you are intentionally writing that way to have a stylistic approach. There are a number of grammatical and punctuation errors throughout the paper that mildly impact the readability of the paper. There is also an inconsistency in spacing throughout the entire document. You need to make sure that the entire document is consistently double-spaced and that you indent paragraphs in order to be properly using MLA."

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