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New School I came from a neighborhood that was not so great or rich I do not have any trust funds and we do not live in a big house in Pepper Pike I live in Cleveland I have a medium sized house and I come from a middleclass neighborhood I went to Cleveland Public Schools since kindigarten I was lucky enough to go to a great elementary schools and receive a good education But when I had to go to sixth grade I was assigned to a horrible school which I had to go to because there was no other option It was the worst rated school in the system The sixth grade was a awful experience Most of my friends who were assigned to my school had gotten a transfer to another school My bus ride was forty-five minutes long We did not have all the supplies we were supposed to have either In that school it was incredibly easy They do not challenge you at all I got straight As I lived that school out and left it as soon as I could During that school year I applied to many different schools Hawken was one of them I also applied to another Cleveland Public School the School of the Arts A few of my friends went there and I heard it was a good school for being in the Cleveland Public system The School of the Arts was more realistic and affordable but Hawken is the one I wanted to go to I eventually got accepted into the school of the Arts Mom I said unusually loud as I saw there was a letter from Hawken I ran up the stairs There is a letter from Hawken here Open it Honey what does it say my mother said as she walked in the living room where I was in It says Im in Oh my gosh I got into Hawken
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