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This morning for about two hours I was on a downward drop of a my roller coaster life But not just any roller coaster Today it was a hypercoaster It culminated with a new low point of my ride with me bawling for a significant amount of time at a major intersection of a densely populated tourist area This was preceded by a contentious phone conversation while covering approximately two miles by bike my quick drop from a much morepleasant high point earlier in the morningI had been melodramatic about a fiasco with my bicycle which I quickly blamed on the man Im in a relationship with He took my unnecessary comment more serious than intended which set us off on a drastic downward trajectoryIn retrospect it is amazing to consider how the conversation plunged to the point where we were both considering our ability to continue in the relationship The sense of being overwhelmed and hopeless about the relationship was all consuming in that instant of the conversation It was paralyzing kind of like the shock one receives has they are falling weightlessly on a roller coasterHow did I let myself get to such a woeful state Why was I expending my time and energy on such unpleasant corkscrews and boomerangs I dont knowI do know that I do NOT love my current job I feel like my friend base in my new city is quite limited And I actually dont like the city I live in Most importantly I dont feel completely confident in my current romantic relationship one that is extremely important to me and that I care about greatly I feel heavy and sad even as I type this out like the Gs that makes you feel weighty at the bottom of a dip However it is important for me to try keep the following in perspectiveI have a jobI live in an interesting cityI am outgoing and it is easy
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