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My summer was a Harry Potter movie Although it wasnt always filled with tests of strength or courage or intense battles it was amusing even when it was slow moving My summer was like a Harry Potter movie because of my lazy days one day journeys and my out-of-state adventures To begin with my lazy days were like the beginning of a Harry Potter movie On these days I mainly went to friends houses and watched Netflix On other days I would stay at home and watch TV or be forced to do chores such as doing the dishes or vacuuming the entire house Sometimes I would even accompany my mom when she would go to Target or Fred MeyerFollowing this my one day journeys began like the middle of a Harry Potter movie The day before the Fourth of July my and a few friends went to someones house for their pool We spent the next two hours doing diving competitions jumping off of the diving board and swimming around Afterwards we went to Emerald Downs and watched the colorful and incredibly loud fireworks My brother even brought his bright green laser pointer that he got in Florida that my dad used to point at things in which a large group of little kids would chase around until the fireworks started Finally my summer got more exciting like the ending of a Harry Potter movie In July my mom my best friend and I drove to Idaho and spent a few days there One of the days my friend and I went to Silverwood Theme Park and spent most of the hot day in the cool water park going in the wave pool with extreme waves and the twisty water slides About a week later I flew down to northern California to visit my aunt uncle and second cousin On the Saturday I was there we took an hour long ferry ride to
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