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1 Make a list at times you were in conflict with someone or an institution - Pregnant abortion Marriage money New Car money 2 Define a time when you lost your innocence Once my daughter was born I realized that Im living in an adult world now and reality really sank in There is no turning back once that child has entered this world Now I have to live up to my responsibilities and everybodys expectations 3 Define a narrative point for the items on each list When I became pregnant my parents wanted me to have an abortion but my fiance and I wanted to keep the baby My fiance and I are ready to get married but we wanted to wait till I finished school so we can be more financially stable We needed a second car so Vic could go to work and I could go to school but money was tight 4 Create some dialogs between you and another character that is related to your narrative point Mom Im pregnant I said and small and frightened voice What do you mean you are pregnant my mother asked as tears began to roll down her face Im sorry I responded Your father and I dont think you should keep it she said strongly I stood up from my chair and said with a firm voice You havent even spoke to Dad Your father and I have already decided that we dont want you or your sister to have a baby until you finish college Its not your decision to make Vic and I are keeping this baby I yelled as I left the room 5 Write a paragraph about that loss of innocence that shows but doesnt tell I was close to the end of my pregnancy and my childbirth classes had begun The
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