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It was on a clear summer night that they picked me up Id been sitting out on the side of the cement pathway for almost a half a week now and had almost given up hope Perhaps that family thought I was too ugly No no I knew that I wasnt ugly I certainly wasnt brand new but I wasnt ugly At least I didnt think soMy family pulled up in their little red car and rolled down the passengers window to get a good look at me A large faced woman with lips big enough to kiss an open book peered out and squinted her heavily made up eyes at meGerald I think this is the best we gonna get The driver looked over his glasses and studied me for a brief few moments He nodded The large woman daintily opened the car door and stuck a chubby leg out which was promptly followed by a formidably sized stomach all wrapped up in red drapery like a holiday present scrunched up and displaying her every crevice She took a few waddles towards me her heels clip-clopping along the cement until she stopped just a foot away from me She bent down and pulled up a part of my body and took in a large breathe of my aroma Oh sugar this is perfect Quick less get it before mass starts GeraldAnd the next thing I knew I was at home nestled comfortably in front of the fireplace I didnt feel like I matched the carpet or the wallpaper or even the little knick-knacks that speckled the wall like the corpses of raindrops on a sidewalk I was foreignRegardless of my looks however the large woman really seemed to love me After she went to Mass with her chubby old husband she would pull off her little white gloves and push her high heels away from her feet with her toes and then lay
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