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I had just finished my first day of work at my new job and was very optimistic I was very happy when I heard Sophia and Vickis voice on the answering machine both asking me to go out with them When I called Sophia back she said that she had already talked to Christina Diana and Danielle and they were all ready for a girls night out We decided to meet at our favorite restaurant Jack Astors Once our parents had dropped us off we found out that there was a two-hour waiting list to eat Sophia and Christina decided that they had a sudden craving for ice cream from the Baskin Robbins inside Colossus In my head I was thinking about how much I hate Colossus and all the twelve-year-old punks that hang out there As we walked through the parking lot towards the theatre I generously told my friends about my views on Colossus and how I felt that the most pathetic thing in the world would be to meet a guy there As we walked in my friends scattered Diana and Vicki went to play at the arcade Sophia and Christina ran for their ice cream and Danielle and I walked to catch up As we strolled towards Baskin Robbins Danielle started waving at a boy around our age They both walked to meet each other and started to talk It wasnt until I caught up with them that I noticed the handsome boy standing behind Danielles friend This boy was standing behind Danielles friend with his bony lanky arms crossed in front of his chest and his thin long legs shoulder length apart The guy that Danielle was talking to was a classmate from elementary school Mike Both the other boy and I just stood behind our friends looking around it was than that I noticed his eyes they were dark and brown were silent and round but they did
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