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Love and Rejection Breaking Up Some felt they were a modern day Romeo and Juliet The reality however is that they were a heartbreaking example of what can go wrong with adolescents Christian Dalvia 14 and Maryling Flores 13 were sweethearts who were forbidden by Flores mother to see each other In early November 1995 the young couple met one last time Standing at the edge of a Florida canal they joined hands and jumped 15 feet into the cold murky water to their deaths Their deaths may sound romantic even heroic to other teenagers when in actuality its just plain stupid There were probably many other reasons for their deaths but ultimately the thought of not being together tortured to the point of wanting to take their own lives This is a very extreme example of what can go wrong with teenage heartbreak One minute theyre inseperable - sharing their most intimate thoughts and details - the next minute they are faces across a crowded room or polite acquaintances at best These are the consequences that come along with a breakup We teens hear about love all around us in music and movies on TV in stories We hear that love will make us happy We hear that single people are lonely We are told that if we are not part of a couple we are not complete We all want to be part of this thing called love Okay we get a boyfriend or girlfriend now everything should be perfect But its not perfect because life never is It is easy to become disappointed Feelings can change One person may decide to say good-bye When that happens the one left behind will feel rejected Rejection means choosing between one thing and
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