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I was sweating bullets as I dished out food at the New Orleans shelter I volunteered for My mom Maria Menzer was supposed to pick me up but knowing her I was not getting my hopes up She had said something about her needing something at the store and I was supposed to get it for her Since there were many parades and events going on I should have known to be careful My mom finally showed up yelling Get your stuff in the car Hurry up Im late for work and I still have to drop you off at the store She had made it sound like this was a life-threatening situation even though she was only five minutes late and the store was right around the corner When we got to the Save-a-Lot store my mother gave me ten dollars and said to get a head of lettuce and a loaf of whole-wheat bread She also said to use the leftover money for a cab ride I got out of our rusty Chevrolet and crossed the street to the bargain store As I entered I immediately smelled the scent of bleach as if they had just cleaned I headed straight to the produce section and picked out the head of lettuce that had the least amount of leaves wilted After that I headed to the natural food section to pick out the whole-wheat bread my mom had asked for While I was waiting I noticed that they had my favorite candy bar actually in stock I mentally calculated how much I would have left for the cab and decided to get the ooey-gooey caramel candy bar I loved so much I left the bleached store and I waltzed into the fresh air As I went to hail a cab I noticed one of my friends I ran over to her and we started talking until I said Bye Jeanne its getting dark and
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