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Kibin. (2024). Marks & spencer: strategic analysis. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/marks-spencer-strategic-analysis-O42Ooeif
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"Your essay shows clear purpose and control over the information. The structure facilitates the reader's experience with the material, and once tidied up in terms of text formatting, the headings will do good work in guiding the reader through the details of the report.
Another formatting issue is that a number of the paragraphs are broken up by random line breaks; make sure to go through and fix these before submitting any final version: combined with occasional very short paragraphs and disruptively formatted headings in all-caps, the essay becomes visually difficult to navigate and it's hard to tell which breaks are purposeful and which are inadvertent.
Your writing shows good sentence variety and flow from one sentence to the next. I do notice a number of errors and/or typos, including rather frequent dropped words. I also spot opportunities to keep finetuning the writing for further efficiency. For example, consider this edit to shift a sentence with two independent clauses into one for improved flow and logic: "A company that was once at the top can't rely on past status in a rapidly changing world.""
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(Kibin, 2024)
Reference list entry:
Kibin. (2024). Marks & spencer: strategic analysis. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/marks-spencer-strategic-analysis-O42Ooeif
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("Marks & Spencer: Strategic Analysis.")
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"Marks & Spencer: Strategic Analysis." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/marks-spencer-strategic-analysis-O42Ooeif
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1. "Marks & Spencer: Strategic Analysis." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/marks-spencer-strategic-analysis-O42Ooeif.
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"Marks & Spencer: Strategic Analysis." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/marks-spencer-strategic-analysis-O42Ooeif.
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