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Mental Illness in Hamlet by William Shakespeare

In this analytical essay, a student considers Hamlet's mental state in the play of the same name by William Shakespeare. The student argues that Hamlet was not born mentally ill but that he ends up going insane because of the play's events.
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Angela's feedback:

"You do a very good job integrating quoted material into your essay and handling citations appropriately, but your block quote should be revisited for formatting purposes. In addition, some of your quotes run long, so keep in mind that you should only be quoting essential information that you feel is best presented in the author's original words. Other important information can and should be paraphrased. For your quotation of Covey, it is unclear whether the words "insanity defense" were originally underlined by Covey. If you underlined the words for emphasis, note that italics are typically used for this purpose. A note should be included regarding this matter. The line spacing for your last two body paragraphs does not match the format of the rest of your work, so this should be corrected to achieve a neater look for your essay as a whole. A final edit is recommended to address various writing convention errors. Various sentences such as the one that starts "Instead, the issues" need to be recast for clarity."

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