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Messenger for Kids: More Harmful than Helpful

This essay provides information on Facebook Messenger for Kids, giving an understanding that younger children are not ready for social media and it can impact a child's emotional health.
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Christina's feedback:

"Good work giving an understanding to the reader that you will be talking about Facebook Messenger for Kids. Please be sure your essay consists of at least five paragraphs. This includes the introduction (where you will give at least three main points to support your claim), three (or more if there are more main points) body paragraphs that will further support each main point, and a conclusion that summarizes your body paragraph and gives a takeaway to the reader. When you write your paper in any style, let’s make sure you are citing your sources appropriately to ensure authors get credit for their information. A solid round of editing would be beneficial to ensure any issues of punctuation, sentence structure, and conjunction usage are resolved before submitting your work."

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