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Metacognitive Reflections on Wastewater Reuse Capstone Project

This series of short responses comments on the student's problem-solution capstone project on wastewater reuse. The student considers the topic from several angles--biology, chemistry--as well as from a metacognitive point of view to assess how recently developed online work habits can contribute to completing a large multi-step project.
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- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
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Bridget's feedback:

"You are off to a good start with these short responses. Overall, you do a good job organizing your thoughts, using paragraphs and transitions to move the discussion from one point to the next. You will want to make sure to carefully read each prompt and respond directly. A good example of success with this is your discussion on GMOs and wastewater quality. However, if we take a look at the question about how online learning takeaways can be applied to the Capstone project (the first response), you've done a good job giving specific examples of working online, but it is not yet clear how this would be applied to the future project. More specific language and signposting will help guide the reader. My main concern is that though well-organized and clearly suggestive of your knowledge, the responses all have a number of errors, ranging from typos to overly casual language ("cause" instead of "because") to mechanical issues. Unfortunately, these issues make it pretty hard to follow your ideas. Make sure to proofread to ensure your reader is presented with solid ethos (authority, credibility) and can encounter your ideas clearly, immediately, and without distraction."

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