In-text citation:
(Kibin, 2024)
Reference list entry:
Kibin. (2024). Midnight adventures of an insomniac. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/midnight-adventures-of-an-insomniac-WWmuocF5
More essays like this:
This preview is partially blurred. Sign up to view the complete essay.
More essays like this:
View other essays like this one:
Christina's feedback:
"Your paper had some very good information in it, and the introduction hooks the reader and encourages them to read more. One thing to focus on as you introduce your paper is to ensure you have a focus or purpose directly stated. This will let the reader know what to expect from the following paragraphs. You also want to be sure that when you are writing your conclusion, you give it a sense of finality, so the reader does not get taken by surprise that it has ended. You also want to make sure you are following the appropriate format. You would benefit from reviewing your formatting guidelines in reference to the title page, as well as the last name and page number that go in the top right corner. You would also greatly benefit from a solid round of proofreading to ensure any issues with sentence structure, word usage, and punctuation are resolved before submitting your paper."
Learn more about this feedback
In-text citation:
(Kibin, 2024)
Reference list entry:
Kibin. (2024). Midnight adventures of an insomniac. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/midnight-adventures-of-an-insomniac-WWmuocF5
In-text citation:
("Midnight Adventures of an Insomniac.")
Works Cited entry:
"Midnight Adventures of an Insomniac." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/midnight-adventures-of-an-insomniac-WWmuocF5
Footnote:
1. "Midnight Adventures of an Insomniac." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/midnight-adventures-of-an-insomniac-WWmuocF5.
Bibliography entry:
"Midnight Adventures of an Insomniac." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/midnight-adventures-of-an-insomniac-WWmuocF5.
You know how looking at a math problem similar to the one you're stuck on can help you get unstuck? Reading example essays works the same way!
Here are some ways our essay examples library can help you with your assignment:
Read our Academic Honor Code for more information on how to use (and how not to use) our library.
Essays may be lightly modified for readability or to protect the anonymity of contributors, but we do not edit essay examples prior to publication. (And nope, we don't source our examples from our editing service! Check out our Privacy and Content Sharing policies for more information.)
The essays in our library are intended to serve as content examples to inspire you as you write your own essay. They're not intended to be submitted as your own work, so we don't waste time removing every error. This allows our team to focus on improving the library and adding new essays.
The example essays in Kibin's library were written by real students for real classes. To protect the anonymity of contributors, we've removed their names and personal information from the essays. When citing an essay from our library, you can use "Kibin" as the author.
Kibin does not guarantee the accuracy, timeliness, or completeness of the essays in the library; essay content should not be construed as advice. For more information on choosing credible sources for your paper, check out this blog post.
Did you find something inaccurate, misleading, abusive, or otherwise problematic in this essay example? Let us know! We'll take a look right away.