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Minds Are Like Parachutes; They Only Function When They Are Open

This is an expository essay in which the author delves into a quote said by Sir John Templeton. The author goes into detail about what they feel that the quote means. More specifically, the author talks about the importance of an open mind and the downfalls of having a closed mind.
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Jenn's feedback:

"This is a very well-written piece. It is neatly formatted making it easy to read and the purpose of your piece is clear from the text. To further improve readers' understanding, consider including a clear and concise introduction and conclusion. The introduction would let the reader know what the piece you are writing is going to be about, and the conclusion would summarize all of the main points made within the body of the essay. There are a number of grammar, punctuation, and spacing errors scattered throughout the essay. Make sure that these errors are resolved through a round of proofreading to make the essay even more clear and understandable. There are a number of facts scattered throughout your essay but nothing is cited. I would suggest making sure that you cite all information that you got from other sources in order to avoid plagiarism issues."

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