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Miracle by Gavin O’Connor Exemplifies How to Put Together a High-Performing Team

In this analytical essay, a student uses the movie Miracle directed by Gavin O’Connor to explain the essential elements for a high-performing team. The student discusses the input-process-output (IPO) model of teams and Tuckman’s stages of group development.
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Angela's feedback:

"You do a great job of breaking down the movie Miracle to explain how Herb Brooks created a high-performing team, and you effectively transition from one theoretical model to another. In terms of writing convention errors, keep in mind that consistent use of the serial comma is encouraged for clarity in writing. Typos include the appearance of “staring” instead of “starting,” and other word choice problems include the use of “whom” instead of “who” and “it’s” instead of “its.” The possessive form of a word is sometimes missing as seen in the phrase “Brooks understanding” instead of “Brooks’s understanding.” A compound modifier that precedes a noun (e.g., “high-performing team”) should be hyphenated, and a comma should be included after “i.e.” when you use it in a parenthetical comment."

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