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Whom I Admire There are a lot of people in this world that sit very high with me I like almost all the people I know and many people inspire me The person whom I admire most would have to be my mother The reason for this is that she had a tough life at the start of her adult years and she has worked her way up to being a very successful person A few of the reason that I admire my mother so much is that when she was sixteen she found out she was pregnant with her child which was me She was thrilled she was going to have a baby but also very scared Things began to go wrong once she found she was pregnant She first told the father and as soon as he found he told he didnt like kids and he was leaving her and she hasnt seen him since Next she told her mother and stepfather Her mother was very happy but her stepfather was not he kicked her out of the house and made her live on her own She moved to Knox Street which is one of the worst neighbor hoods in Maine She stayed in school the whole time she was pregnant with me and she also maintained a job She finally had me in January of nineteen eighty-four Despite living on her own and having a baby she stayed in school and completed her senior year This is the first reason I admire my mom she had so much will power to keep going was life was at its low point Another reason that I admire my mother is when she was about eight her mother and father split up This is very hard on all children but her father hated her mother and the children Through the years they had some contact but in the last five years she
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