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I had wanted to move for a long time but when my mom told me we might be moving I was devastated I was sitting on my couch and my mom was looking at houses online At first I thought she was just seeing what was out there as she usually does but then I started asking questions that I felt like I already knew the answer to I knew what she was going to say and I could not decide what to feel I remember having to hide the news from all my friends and everyone I knew I did slip a few of my dance friends some hints before I was allowed to tell but other than that everyone was clueless We had to make up excuses to come up to Massachusetts so we could look at houses without anyone finding out That first day house hunting my mom and I looked at about eight houses We absolutely loved the first one but it was a short sale and there were issues with the bank not wanting to sell the house The rest of the houses that day were not what we had in mind The rooms were choppy and small wallpapered ugly or needed a lot of work By the time I could tell anyone I only had about a week left in Ballston Spa The first person I told in person was my best friend We were standing in my kitchen in a circle her mom my mom Alex and I I started laughing because I did not know what else to do At first they did not believe us but when it sank in we all cried We had been friends since we were four years old Our birthdays were on the same day we were like twins That night I went to my school play after texting my friends the news I sat with my dance friends in shock
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