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When I was about ten years of age my dad discussed moving to adifferent location The weather in West Virginia seemed to get morecolder with lots of snow My dad wanted to live in a climate where itwould have warmer temperatures Once a year we would visit SummertonSouth Carolina to see my dads cousins Summerton seems like thesmallest town in the world to me One day after school on a Friday we went down to Summerton After along seven hours we finally got there The next day we were going tolook at a few lots that my dads cousins suggested I didnt know what tothink at the time The next day we went and they showed us these tworeally nice lots that would provide us with a lot of space My dad toldthe man who had owned them that we really interested in them After afew weeks of discussing about the lot we made a plan to go down thereand buy them I guess the lot wasnt for us because the next time wewent to go give the guy the check he had sold them that morning For the next couple of years my mom and dad kept looking for lots andwhen they were about to give up we found one This time my dad wasgoing to make sure that he didnt miss the lot It might of not beentwo lots but it was good enough for us to build a new house When I wasin fifth grade we had bought the lot The lot sat in front of the golfcourse and a pond it had a beautiful overlook of the lake When I wasin sixth grade they started building By my seventh grade year they hadalmost finished the house The builders and my father predicted thatby the summer of 2009 we could move in We decided to start packing andmove in August the first
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