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I found my faith at the tender age of 5 after a tragic accident I sustaining 1st degree burns on my left arm and leg I soon began my trails and tests of strength and faith This faith has seen me through three different religions and left them all behind for only one I have been given so many miracles and even through the direst of situations God has seen me through my darkest hours sustaining my faith to unbelievable heights My faith and belief in God is real as you will soon discoverKneeling on my knees in front of the sofa in my parents dark living room my hands clasped in prayer I prayed Father help me get my father to the doctor and I will accept whatever your will is I just ask that you give me a little more time with him The next day I told my father Dad I have done everything I know to do but you are still going down hill Now it is time to get you to the doctor and find out what is going on with you My dad replied Yes call the doctor God answered my prayers we got him to the doctor that day and I found out that my dad was dying of terminal lung cancer God also answered the other part of my prayer I asked for a little more time and he gave me exactly one month to the day with my father before he passed awayI received the Presidential Recall back to active duty for the Navy after September 11th 2001 I asked God after I answered the call to get me back to California to be with my children After 6 months in Guantanamo Bay Cuba and spending 4 months in Ingleside TX My command asked me where I wanted to go for my 2nd year and I said Send me to San Diego CA While my command
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