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My perspective of life changed immensely around this time a year agoI realized that you cant take things for granted Use the time you havenow to spend with your loved ones because you dont know what your futureholds Any part of your life can be taken away from you in just a blink ofan eye Last year I learned that things can be taken away from you justas fast as you receive them when my little sister Rachel was born Last June I found out that I was going to have a new baby sisterThis news was very exciting to me and my entire family Who doesnt love anew baby After a few months it was getting close to her due date Thelast ultrasound results stated that there was a spot on my sisters brainand the doctors were clueless as to what it could be The next few weekswere emotional for everyone Something was wrong inside the womb where the baby was but nobodyknew exactly what The doctors were afraid to leave the baby because ifthey put stress on her they knew she would die Five weeks before her due date on October 9 2012 the doctorsdeclared an emergency C-section for the baby because they didnt want toput any more stress on her At 559 pm my younger sister Kelsey and I had anew baby sister Rachel The doctors still didnt know what was wrong withher though She was rushed into the NICU immediately Kelsey and I were soexcited to see her Because she was in the NICU my dad had to take us inone at a time though When I walked in to see her I instantly smiled She was the cutestthing I had ever seen She was so tiny She weighed
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