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Well this is strange I think to myself as I open my phone and see that Im currently getting a call from Bailey She never just randomly calls me Even though Im in the middle of dance pictures I take a second to call my best friend If shes calling it must be important I miss the call while contemplating whether to answer it and I decide to call her back As I sit outside of the dance studio like I do every Monday all dressed up in an elaborate costume I call Bailey while tapping my foot impatiently The phone is taunting me with its low deep ring and I become antsy then finally I hear just a casual familiar voice from the opposite end of the phone lineHey says Bailey in her happy voice but I automatically can tell there is something hidden underneath her voice a tone of eagerness and anxiety Whats going on I ask trying to get to the point quicklyIm pregnant Says Bailey calmly as if she was telling me about the weather In that very moment it was as if a train had hit me pushing me down the track and I was completely out of control As a fourteen-year-old girl it was not my first instinct to celebrate this news As I slowly registered what had just been said to me I knew life was about to change immensely for the both of us Thinking about all the hardships my best friend was about to face broke my heart but I knew I would stay by her side through good times and bad I made that promise to her long ago Little did I know in those moments outside the dance studio that I was going to learn about how all young adults should give his life over to God to help one see the light in the darknessBailey and I had been friends since third grade
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