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From the time that I was old even to realize what a dream was I had many I had dreamt to become so many things year after year as I grew It became a different dream every time Sometimes I dreamt to become a doctor or lawyer pediatrician teacher and even a famous business woman who traveled across the world and worked for the president Growing up seeing my two elder sisters graduate from high school with almost straight As and go to Cal States even though they had gotten accepted to UCs I dreamt a little bigger dream than theirs I dreamt to go straight to a University and to try the hardest I ever have I dreamt to do more than anyone in my family when it would come to educating myself I dreamt to live my life to the fullest and to learn everything I can about the things I love to become knowledgeable on all that I couldEven though I was in a hard to learn environment parties movie nights concerts I tried my best to stay away from all relationships and other distractions When I moved to Port of Los Angeles High School from Carson Senior High School my ideas on everything completely changed The environment was beautiful and clean the teachers were nice and cared about teaching their students There was this indescribable feeling I got as I entered into this school I became a little more interested and became a little more interactive with the teachers I communicated with almost all my fellow peers They say not to be picky about choosing a school to go to because education is the same everywhere you go I disagree changing schools made a huge difference for me a better difference By going to POLAHS and being involved in clubs and programs I got plenty of chances to go on trips to colleges preform in the talent shows each
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