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I am a clumsy person At times I am uncoordinated and I always have badbalance I like to bump into walls trip over my own feet and Isometimes think I have two left hands Hurting myself seem like aneveryday norm to me When I make sounds like oouch no one reallybothers to ask me if I am OK anymore because they know that I am allright In Chicago when it snows it really snows The snow iseverywhere Cars houses buildings streets they are all completelywhite One day in particular I was in sixth grade and getting out of schoolI was walking with a group of friends to our own home Everyone wasdressed in their warmest outfit We had on gloves boots hats scarvesand anything that could have a possibility to help keep us nice andwarm As children only in sixth grade we loved to have fun Snowball fightswas what we did to enjoy ourselves before we went straight home Ididnt realty enjoy my self during one of these games because I wouldalways get hit in the face and get frostbite I still played because Inever wanted to be left out of the funThis day snowballs were flying and everyoneincluding myself wasscreaming and we were have a wonderful time I was starting to pick up anice well rounded ball of snow when I got hit with one and it caught meby surprise I stumbled but I surprisingly caught myself before I fellI had thrown the snowball towards a group of people and poorly attemptedto run awayAs the fun and excitement continued on I proceeded to get attackedwith hundreds and hundreds balls of snow and from every angle I hadstarted to do a half run while looking behind my shoulder While doingso I was not paying attention to what was in front of me Being myself Itripped over the curb into a pool of melted snow that turned into a poolof
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