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I remember that hot humid night as if it was yesterday I was riding in the car with my daddy The adrenaline was pumping through my veins at the speed of Dale JR on his last lap I have never been more scared and panicked in my life Daddy did not notice the change in speed limit coming off the highway My heart dropped to the pit of my stomach like a rock fallen in a deep well as I spotted those familiar red and blue lights coming over the hill behind us The siren sounded and the lights lit up the dark night like the 4th of July At that moment I knew I never wanted to get back in the car with my daddy when he had been drinking beerEarlier that day daddy and I had been watching TV and resting before we would go to the dirt track races later on that afternoon The phone had rang and by the secretiveness sneaky way he was acting a bad feeling crept up in my stomach I had the strangest feeling that something bad was going to happen Despite my strange feeling I went on with my day and I went to get ready for a fun filled night at Thunderbird Speedway I had always asked my daddy not to drink beer when I had come to his house on the weekends He would always promise he would not drinkWe arrived at Thunderbird Speedway on that hot steamy afternoon to the smell of gasoline drifting through the thick stale air The motors of the cars sounded like a fleet of jets flying across the sky It seemed like there were hundreds of people there to cheer on their favorite drivers We would sit up in the grand stands that seemed like we were on top of Mount Everest The taste of the sweet sticky cotton candy was my favorite thing to eat I would
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