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When I was a very shy close minded little girl I got the biggest news of my life My life was going to change instantly and it hit me like the hurricane hit Japan unexpectedly This meant leaving my loved ones people who had always been there as if I were their own daughter The time came when I had to leaveit was the saddest moment I ever encountered Watching tears rolling down my grandparents face as they waved with a big smile on their face trying to show me it was okay That was the moment I realized that it was as real as it could getAs I took my first steps in a new country I saw people who had different characteristics as me They had blonde hair with eyes like a crystal light which were blue and tall like the goliath walking around me I couldnt keep my eyes of off them I walked out of the airport and tall colorful and yellow taxis everywhere were the first things that caught my eye It was the first time I saw a place like this reminded me of a Utopia I read in classThere were two people from the place we came reminded me of home They were our guiders to take us to the place we were going to call home for years We drove and we passed unknown restaurants beautiful parks and other cars I have never seen before I felt as if we were on a race car fast and straight with no stops Suddenly we passed the tall buildings and came upon the barren road with nothing around it but dirt bushes and this plain look for miles and milesI sat on the very back of the minivan which was also next to a friend that I would share memories with Thoughts came to mind as I could hear the silence sound of the wind I couldnt take out
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