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As I approached the party I could hear the blasting music all the way from the street When I reached the back of the house to enter I could distinguish the song that was playing it was Its good to be King by Tom Petty After waiting in a line to enter I was finally in the loud crowded house Upon my arrival the host of the party informed me that there were no cups left and that I would have to look for one So I handed him my money as I was shoved into the next room by other arriving guest eager to enter Every person there was present for their own personal reasons Whether these reason be social or simply for entertainment no one could tell The only thing we all had in common was our goal to consume alcohol As soon as I walked in the room I immediately could see and smell the smoke that was lingering in the air around the house I was handed a cup by a friend Looking into it to see if it had been used we both shrugged and turned towards the basement As I pushed my way through the crowd to look for the keg I immediately knew it was in the corner because of the crowd surrounding it Once I reached the keg I found myself waiting once again for my beer The person who was filling up the cups was not filling them first come first serve He would fill the cups of his friends first then the girls and then if he had to fill up his own cup he would While doing this he was talking his friend whose job it was to pump the keg when needed People were sticking their cups in front of the tap as if they were fighting for food and they hadnt eaten for days There must of have
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