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Kibin. (2025). My evolving relationship with reading and writing. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-evolving-relationship-with-reading-and-writing-LRhCWhek
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Amanda's feedback:
"I thought you crafted a beautiful essay that really shared your joy of reading and writing. Unfortunately, I struggled a bit with your thesis and in some places the ideas felt disconnected. Sentence by sentence, the paper is great, but keeping the narrative thread between different ideas doesn't flow as smoothly as it should, and there are some grammatical errors that impede readability. I would suggest retooling the essay a touch in your thesis. Maybe instead of making your thesis a chronological account, make it more general, something about how your love for reading and writing is an ongoing relationship that has transformed in many ways over the years. This gives you more room to build a cohesive narrative that shows how your relationship with writing/reading is like a romantic relationship -- starts off with butterflies and magic, and then there's some time where it's stormy and you're not sure about it, and now you've settled into a steady and harmonious rhythm. That would really allow you to push your metaphor and connect all the ideas here. Also, make sure you proofread this or have a peer do it before submission!"
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