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Where should I begin I guess that I will start with the construction of my house Winter was coming soon so my two brothers and I decided to make houses for shelter from the cold I being the smart one of the group decided to make my house out of trusty brick and mortar I knew that this winter would be a snow filled because of El Nio and only something as strong as brick would keep me warm and safe We started construction of our houses It was only then that I found that my brothers being totally ignorant of my warnings were building their houses from weak materials The youngest one Stu was making his house out of hay The middle one Pid was building his out of sticks from the forest In less than two days I just finished laying the foundation to my miniature NORAD and my brothers finished building their makeshift cottages and went frolicking in the forest like two little schoolgirls I yelled and nagged at them for not spending the time and energy to make a half-decent shelter for days while my fort was coming to life When I finally finished I sat in front of the fire and started to read Little Red Riding Hood The winter would not officially begin for another week but the temperature had already started to drop dramatically My brothers had trouble starting fires and keeping warm because their shacks could not hold out the gusts of wind One day a wolf appeared in the camp and started chasing my brother while they were playing Each made it to their house unscathed The wolf started to beat on the hay house of Stu The wolf got tired and took a deep breath When he exhaled the hay collapsed and Stu ran to Pids house The wolf was to tired to give chase and Stu made it safely When the wolf arrived at
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