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Life in the United States As an 18 year old girl graduating from high school was the biggest accomplishment of my life Just the though about going on to a four year school would frightened me but somehow I knew I would over come it It was December ten of the year two-thousand and my graduation party was going to be held that night By this time I had already made up my mind about where I was heading for some reason which I dont even remember everybody in my school friends family and my parents suggested me to go to the United states and start my future there At that moment I didnt realize that with this decision I was going to have to leave all of my family and friends When I came to this country my mind was full of dreams and goals waiting to be fulfilled I was so involved in my school work and trying to do so many things at once that without even realizing it I began to lose track of where I was going In a way I began to forget about my closest relatives and my country Colombia A few months after residing in Morristown I meet a wonderful guy named Nestor He started helping me he was there when ever I needed him and since I didnt have any family here he became kind of my only support my confident and my friend One day without even expecting it he asked me out I was very excited about the fact that him and I were officially boyfriend and girlfriend Since that day Nestor and I became a wonderful couple Nestor definitively changed my life but he also made that my sense of disorientation grow Time passed and summer vacations came It was the perfect moment and the best opportunity to go back to my country Colombia and visit my family and
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