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As I was walking on the deserted beach one enchanting evening I was astounded at the remarkable beauty nature offers That enticing evening was remarkably wonderfully fascinating and sharing this enduring everlasting memory leaves me breathless My exquisite evening on the beach was pleasant and fascinating The first manifest picture that comes to my imaginative mind is that of the rolling pounding waves that sound like bolts of lightning coming down from the heaven being sent by a Greek god The voracious hunger coming from the roaring waves crashed onto the shiny joviality golden sand and in less than a insignificant second returned to their extraordinary and luxurious home away from home in the ocean On the luminous sand I saw gigantic giant steps and baby miniature footsteps Having my feet sinking into the sand acting similar to that of quick sand then taking out my feet having them look like prunes I also saw many impressive sand castles that had a distinct look of an actual house that would make someone go WOW The castles were all distinctly unique some huge others tiny all crafted with the same gleaming sand and the heart ship that the beach and ocean can offer you Beautiful and delicate seashells accented in the yellow ginger sand with their energetic glowing living color As I looked upon the rooted gleaming horizon I was shocked and so overwhelmed to see the monstrous tremendous ocean meeting the lovely peaceful blue sky with cotton candy colored clouds The elongated horizon line looked like an extended rainbow with its many colors It looked so soft like angel wings I felt the carefree calm and appreciated the women like beauty of nature I kept on looking at the blinding hot sun as it changed its colors to fire like a volcanoes lava Having the sun appear and suddenly disappear throughout the heavenly skies As I kept looking up at the angelic sky
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